ext_11923 ([identity profile] revena.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] revena 2006-09-01 08:23 pm (UTC)

Heh, what's shameless? Asking me to read? Or the story itself? ;-)

I'll take a look! How in-depth of a critique would you like?
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